Thursday, September 22, 2016

Maths portfolio post

description: In maths we did a rich task we got two go's at it. We also have a slide I found this pretty hard.








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Wednesday, September 14, 2016

Art portfolio post

 description: For art this term we have been doing calendar art. We had to do a background plan and then we did a self portrait with the background that we designed before the self portrait. I found it sort of hard because i did not design my background fast enough and then i did not have very many sessions to draw my self portrait.

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This is my self portrait 
And this is my background plan











Feedback: you did a great job 
 Feedfoward: but next time you could make your I's capital and make a bit bigger description.
Sophie I



Evalution:  i think that i did quite well at my art because i have never done this well before.

Tuesday, September 13, 2016

Writing portfolio sample

Description: In writing our storys were inspired by a how to make a tennis ball video but it could not have anything to do with tennis. I am in troys group for writing and i found this story a little hard because it could not have anything to do with tennis.

My story:



Feedback: i think you did really good on the story -mayson
FeesFoward: i think it's ou need to work on doing the talking symbol -mayson

Evaluation: i think i wrote a good story because I don't normally write this much.

Sunday, September 11, 2016

Et reo portfolio sample

Description: in ET Reo we have been learning what a whakatauki is. A whakatauki is a proverb but not the book in the Bible proverbs.but sadly i could not find my artwork because i have not finished yet i think it is weird that i can not find it. Our whakatauki was he aha te mea nui o te ao? He tangata! He tangata! He tangata! That means whats the most important thing in the world? The people! The people! The people!

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Feedback : I like your photo it is a good photo.
Feedforward: next time you could make your description a bit longer.
Sophie Irvine.


Evaluation: i think i could have done a lot better with my art because I did not get the art done.